Dusty Archibald Lane was born on April 20, 1981 in Schenectady New York to Sky and Tabitha Lane. He graduated from high school at the top of his class and went on to pursue a degree in physics at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology. Following the tragic death of his father due to a faulty power line, Dusty Developed an acute phobia for hanging wires which affected him for the rest of his life. He worked from home as a telemarketer for Anthem Insurance company and had a shining sales record. Dusty passed away on January 6, 2010 at the young age of twenty-nine. An unlikely accident occurred involving a large hanging icicle and a slick sidewalk. He will be sorely missed, survived by his mother Tabitha. Services for Dusty Lane will be held at our lady of solitude cathedral on January 9, 2010.
This obituary is pretty good. There are no tricky, over dramatic, or complex in the death or obituary for your main character. It is straight to the point but bizarre. Pretty good.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if the death was painful. Nice, to the point death. Sounds like the guy has some bad luck
ReplyDeleteI liked this, no one ever suspects how deadly an icicle can be haha. However this was a pretty straight forward writing, which is good. You did not try to make something completely over the top but at the same time was able to add a little humor and thats neat.
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